tandem story :the child snatcher

October 24th, 2007


we did this tandem story for extension english and here is he first para

There was so much fear in the town. Everyone was scared to walk out his or her front door. The people walking down the street walked with apprehension, expecting someone to jump out at them any minute. It wasn’t the someone they were scared of, but a something! In fact no one was sure it was a thing. It was more of a presence. It wasn’t a presence you could see, but you would know it was coming when you smelt the rotting smell of decomposing flesh and you felt the fear; but worst of all you could hear it calling in it’s bone chilling rasping voice. “ Mine. All mine!” Before it snatched children from their parent’s grasp.




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